Hey Gary - watch your camera - it feels very erratic; you need to slow it down, make it graceful... also, I'm not sure about your scale; for instance, that bridge, in terms of design, looks like an ordinary footbridge, but I think it's meant to be more massive than that? Would the Victorians really build such a thing? I don't think so :http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Isambard_Kingdom_Brunel
Hi Gary,Alan said that you might like some pointers in regard to concept art for your minor project, having created a few projects that have a similar feel to the one you are producing I might be able to help you out. I just missed you today but I am in the base room tomorrow from about 9:15 till about 16:45. Or I might be able to pop in on Thursday for a while. Let me know if Thursday is a better option for you.
Hi Simon - Yeah tomorrow is fine for me to come in to chat and get some tips, I will bring in some rough drawings and concept art from this project for you to take a look at.
Gary, I forgot to say blog all your stages and I will endeavour to feedback.